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when you are far away

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i miss you.
every day. every night.
maybe i love you.
don't leave me.


don't forget me.

dad's pullover. he don't know that i have him sweater ;d

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Image size
512x467px 126.16 KB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
E-520
Shutter Speed
1/13 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
14 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jun 19, 2009, 3:20:51 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

In my opinion, I think the square crop works rather nicely, even considering the tightness at the top. Squeezing the model in like that gives a certain tension to the image, I think. It does move emphasis away from her resting her chin on her knee, as *JJohnsonPhotog said in a previous critique, but maybe simply resting is a bit too relaxed for what the photographer was trying to portray. Having her only slightly off center would be the likely choice for most other images, but I think the large amount of empty space to the left is actually an aspect of the picture that contributes to the theme, similarly to the tightness of the crop vertically.