This picture is beautiful, I think you have done a fabulous job! I do commend the lighting through the piece, its pristine. Personally, however, I feel the focus should of been on her face. I feel the vision gets slightly lost focusing on the mid-foreground reeds/grass and her shoulder. That being said the depth of field is dramatic and that suits the overall theme of the piece. I also love the choice of colouring again pristine, dramatic and whimsical! I think you could go colour but it would definitely have to be a 'vintage' form of colouring in subtle hues of red and yellow. Great work
knock...knock...XD..the pristine entanglement of the figure with the surroundings is write on...it wouldn't work in color, would it. And it's amazing how the tonal value of the skin is equal to the lighted texture tree bark(strength in nature so to speak...). so you could say that she is not caught in the weeds because she is a seed or not a seed...is she tough on the out side by decision or just a mangled mess on the inside...who's there...are you...are you hiding and want to be found...or is it..........me. me who should be the woods man to find you not for what you are on the outside but, hunt in you, the internal forest of my desires to be my own. How can I love a woods of black and white, is this a dream of darkened night....nay, nay for I am lost in my own forest of dreams...day to night, night to day...whoa...whoa I was getting carried away with the picture sorry for the digression. please continue.
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