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I love the pose and I think that you look gorgeous. I really love the colors, too. The one thing I would change--the cropping. A couple of important rules are:
-Don't leave a lot of space above the subject in a portrait
-Don't place subjects in the center

Having said that, I think that you should crop it from the top (leave just a little bit of room above the wrist). Then crop it from the right (again, leaving a little bit of room to the right of your shoulder blade). One more, crop it from the bottom (leave a little bit of room under the elbow--and it's okay if the necklace is cut off in the photo, I think that that makes it more interesting).

Other than that, it's perfect. :heart:
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:iconerjansert:
çok güzel :)

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:iconjonxnyc:
So beautiful

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Every sock has a matching sock

Some people call me cynical. They'll probably die
:iconendworld:
very cute ... face, colours, lighting ...

i think she is cuter with long hair right ! but still cute =]


keep it up ~

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:iconziyafot1:
beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful
:iconleivatinn-fafner:
you look so beautiful. did you cut your hair? or it still long?
:iconchomik05:
Brak słów!
Super shot i jak zwykle niezwykła modelka :]
:iconpablo12288:
Gorgeous model and pose. Good lighting, too.
:iconnaked-art:
wow,thats just sweet..i love it :shocked:

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