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September 13, 2009
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I love the pose and I think that you look gorgeous. I really love the colors, too. The one thing I would change--the cropping. A couple of important rules are:
-Don't leave a lot of space above the subject in a portrait
-Don't place subjects in the center

Having said that, I think that you should crop it from the top (leave just a little bit of room above the wrist). Then crop it from the right (again, leaving a little bit of room to the right of your shoulder blade). One more, crop it from the bottom (leave a little bit of room under the elbow--and it's okay if the necklace is cut off in the photo, I think that that makes it more interesting).

Other than that, it's perfect. :heart:
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:iconmarfgracia:
prety cool!!
like this so much
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:iconbanan6-pancakes:
really beautiful expression.

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:icon456258:
gorgeous model :omfg:
great location :)

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:iconshyennn:
Absolutely gorgeous!!
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:iconxeneras:
great pose,very gentle and sweet.i like it.
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:icontoadette-xd:
unbelievable good ♥ :deviation:

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~iceLoverr Sep 26, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful
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:iconfase-illustration:
:omfg: sooooo......gorgeous...can i:hug: u...
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